Friday, 13 February 2015

Tutor Feedback

MGT: Merit. 
Our product is currently a pass because:

  • The product is unfinished this is due to the narrative sequence not being done.
  • Audio issues with the performance.
  • There is no evidence of us editing and adding effects on out Blog.
  • We haven't written on our blog the meanings behind the edits. 
Our strengths are:

  • Good lip syncing with the performance and the audio.
  • Jump cuts match the beat of the song.
  • The quality of the shot is good, the purple light has the effect we wanted it to have.
The things we need to improve on:

  • We need to create empathy for Bella.
  • We need to film more shots that are from the point of view of Bella and show her perspective. 
  • We need to film more close ups and shot revers shots of Bella and James. Also more angles of them.
  • Continuty of Bella's performance, the purple light is lighter in some shots compared to others. 

What I will do to achieve this:
  • Film more shots of close ups, angles, point of view 
  • Check the positioning of the shots 
  • Make sure that all of the footage of Bella performance is consistent in the purple colour. 

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